The Plain of Smokes
The Plain of Smokes is a long poem (nearly 1800 lines) utilizing and about, though by no means exclusively about, the city of Los Angeles. The poem has four distinctive voices, one of which is that of the archetypal Angeleno and urban foot-soldier, the private detective. Ken Price chose this section, entitled “Philip Marlowe, where are you?’’ and composed thirty original drawings to illustrate it. Approximately the last third of this section is extracted here. We are following the detective, through his own narration, on one investigative day, from waking in a cheap residential hotel in Hollywood to day’s end. The case, of course, is murder: a young man has bled to death in a bathtub, under circumstances that recall the infamous Fatty Arbuckle case of the thirties. It is now mid-afternoon. . .
how’s that for realism
so it’s back into the car
which I’ll be buried in
though it’ll need
paint and tires first
and onto the hollywood inbound
to the pasadena
outbound
where the graffiti on the tunnel wall
say save los trees
which we should
because they are all dying
from cajon to cahuenga
and later
deeper into it
I find myself between the interchange
and chavez ravine
the department of water and power parking lot
and when I find finally a phone
there’s a punk in it
wearing a black jacket
with USS Indianapolis
embroidered on it
I loved a woman once
whose father died on that tub
torpedoed in the china sea
losing all hands to sharks
the pacific she told me
is a monotonous nightmare
that we can not escape from
I have the sense
that I have dreamt all this before
and the end is horrible
but nothing happens
wanna buy he says some good shit
and I say sonny
I know some real detectives downtown
so shove off
get screwed
he says
which is what is happening
I should quit this racket
go to the islands
and watch beautiful women
anything but this wandering
for thirty years in a town
that makes no sense
and ma bell’s phones
don’t work any better
than when she invented them
or the kid’s broken it
because
the bitch takes my money
and gives nothing back
not even the recording